A Double-Blind Trial of Low Doses of Subcutaneous Heparin in the Prevention of Deep Vein Thrombosis after Myocardial Infarction:Prevention by Heparin.
文题中常常可以删去不必要的冠词(a,an和the)和多余的说明性短语:studies of;observation on;investigation of;evaluation of ;experimental report of;development of;use of ;treatment of …
作者还要注意文题中词意上的重叠,如Tuaumatic Injuries of the Inferior Vena Cava;Surgical Postoperative Bleeding Associated with Aspirin Ingestion;Sterilization with IUD Contraception.
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下面是修饰词位置不当的例子:Toxoplasmosis in Humans Derived from Cats正确的写法是:Toxoplasmosis Derived from Cats in Humans
又如:Cars Blamed for Pollution by Scientist正确的写法是:Cars Blamed by Scientist for Pollution
名词堆砌
Factors Influencing Primary Liver Cancer Resection Survival Rate比较好的写法是:Factors Influencing Survival Rate After Resection of Primary Liver Cancer
又如:Severe Respiratory Tract Erosive Burns 可改为:Severe Erosive Burns of the Respiratory Tract
冗繁A 29-year-old Man with Miliary Pulmonary Patten on Radiologic Examination其实取后半部分文字文字作文题就够了:Miliary Pulmonary Patten on Radiologic Examination
西方作者倾向于使用一个简短的句子作为问题,句子多为省略句、简短的陈述句,也可以用疑问句,显得活泼而吸引人。国内作者在写文题时可以尝试模仿西方作者的这种做法。
例如: